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I have a question guys how often is this updated LOL because I think the worst cliffhanger is in William's route I really want him to admit that he loves Samuel

SAMEEE

Same here!

Not very often, maybe an update every 1.5 months or so, cycling through Nik>Will>Cliff>Murdoch. So probably another 3 months before another Will update.

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Is it true there's a sprite of the demon/spirit in William's route? 🤔🤔

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Yep

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Is it an April Fools thing?

Been through all routes , there all intresting and have a mystery to them

Has anyone decoded the message from the astronomy class? Just want to know before I endeavor to.

CLIFF's ROUTES IS VERY LOVELY, I LOVE THE PART WHERE MURDOCH SANG FOR THEM~!!

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i noticed that there's a pair of glowing red eyes here~No description available.

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soo i decided to brighten up the image and saw this :0No description available.

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WOAHHH!!

Intresting

Now that you point it out I see it but its easy to miss if you don't look hard

true :3

I know we just got an update 20 days ago but does anyone know when the next one will be is it usually every 3 months? Also I know Nik's route will be next afterwards is it Murdoch or William. Love Will's route  but Murdoch's cliffhanger was wild I can't wait.😭

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Actually, it is quite peculiar because build 20 (Murdoch) was released on patreon yesterday ^^ 

Wait fr? and doesn't everything that comes out on patreon come out for everyone else around 2 weeks later? So would the next update be murdoch??

wait yeah based off of the update schedule it would make sense that murdoch's route would get an update next not Nik. 

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Man… this one hits hard! No kidding, with the adult theme. If you want to know, it has a psychological horror to it. But also a normal life event that has happened in real life. I have seen these scenarios even on my family… Be careful when going in this game without some mental preparation.

Give the game a try if you have seen some similar game that have relationships that are messed up like these. I can say that it is worth the time to see perspectives with an open mind in this one.

Getting this aside, Spoilers ahead

Per route as of: Build 19

William: I started with this route, but saw what this had its hits on slavery, and having a family that you had no love to. This poor fella is messed up. And even though it is hard to see this route, I saw some perspective of the character, and thank you for that. He is kinda a slave in his work but dutiful when he needs to be, but sometimes he breaks.

Murdoch: Second time playing the game, first time on the route. A family of riches that forces marriage and abuse. I can see that happening because it is a normal event, but man, I did not expect to see him be abused like that. I actually feel bad more for this character than William… I love the coyote, but he has a better life than this fella.

New Nikolai: Third time playing the game, first time on the route. Wow, this dynamic of friends become lover I have seen in other VN´s for a while. And I can say that this one did not disappoint, we know more of the characters while they are slowly introduced to us. Nikolai is… well, kinda can’t point out how he is… I guess reserved but also kind for worrying about Sam. I know he cares a lot for Sam, but I see that he also loves Sam. (if we pick this route, of course.) I enjoy the interactions of the characters but… I feel… is hard to say, it feels conflicting stuff in the way he acts. For now, I can’t grasp completely how he is… compared to the previous ones.

Not only that, but I will continue the review after finishing the rest of the routes. It is not a full review is just my opinion so far, I’m not going through everything right now just some of it.

I have a quick question, Nik's route will still be getting updated, yes? I'm already shaking from that..thing you see. But i wanted to know it his route is done, or still getting work done on it.

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following the sequence, build 21 will be the next nik's update, unless they change something

Waitt what's the sequence? I'm i intrigued

the pattern I've observed has been like this: william, cliff, murdoch, nik. But, i think they can change it whenever they want

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THE SONG ON CLIFF AND MURDOCHS ROUTE HAD NO BUSINESS BEING SO GOOD.

AMAZING JOB AS ALWAYS

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This happened on Williams route. 🤔🤔😮😮

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Doesn't occur when I run through it on my pc, haha. Not sure what's going on there. 

-George

Crap I forgot to mention its on Android. Also it fixes itself after a few more lines of dialogue. 😅😅😃😃

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I know that the VN isn't finished yet but please tell me cliff gets a good ending:(

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I have good news for you, it is confirmed that TSR will have good endings, although what does it mean in this case is unknown. I will probably cry anyway ;)

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I'm glad to know, because they all deserve to be happy!

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Each routes will have their own good and bad ending :)

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How long has that face been there when talking with William on Cliff's route???? (Before they leave) 🤔🤔😱😱

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it has been there even before the updates

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I haven't noticed until now, that's freaky. 😱😱😱

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I don't know how you pulled it off but this game's story is absolutely perfect; It manages to make me laugh, cry, be horny, and be scared shitless all at once and it just blends together so well.

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Quick summary of the plot: Be gay; Do Crimes

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My biggest wish since I started reading this amazing story (regardless of the route) was fulfilled in this build 19. In my dreams it would be william instead of cliff in the animated video, but it was just perfect anyway. Thank you creators. Every second was perfect. It thrilled me.

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the writers confirmed that eventually there'll be an animatic for each route, we just gotta be patient!

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Everybody will get an animatic eventually!
-George

OMG! I am so fucking happy now. Thanks, guys <3

Can you miss the animatic? I didn't see one during Cliff's route

this appears at the end of chapter 2

really interested when Nik will get an updat

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I think build 21 is the next nik's update

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build 19

yeah go ahead give us some awesome hearth warming trinkets before you break us the same way you did in echo

YOU CANT TRICK ME TWICE!!!

ho am i kidding?

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I didn't write any of echo but noted, haha.
-George

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yeah i figure but still have that same vibe

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Similar in some ways, drastically different in others is the goal. 
-George

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Do you see the wabbits, George?

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Spoilers



Build 19 has to be my favorite update so far. The short music video, the music, the new UI, the plot. I didn't expect the perspective to change so quickly. It's safe to assume this will be a continuing trend within the other routes as well. I do miss Samuel's monologues because his commentary always had that pessimistic vibe to it. 

Props off to the music video, it was so frickennnn adorable and catchy. Seriously, I don't think I've ever fangirled this hard before. 

Cliff's route is currently setting itself up  from what I read. The town's clergy, the townsfolk, Jeb's suspicion on the town, the atmosphere, everything was pretty good.

10/10! The wait was well worth it. See you guys next time when Arches Build 5 releases to the publc.

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Some errors I found: On William's route, closing the notebook causes an error regarding the previous music volume, and on Nik's route, the red tracing overlay for the map don't really work, I think it's something to do with the image's format

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Sad. There's no update on Android yet

I think its just harder to make since he has to convert it to files using android it shouldn't be too much longer

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Please read the devlog. We are begging you. Lol. 
-George

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i estimate that TSR is about 45-50% completed

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its the same for me to it says an error when the notebook is being closed

(using the windows ver. btw)

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Im addicted to the Animatic song 

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Just found a bug in this new version. Everytime I open the notebook on Williams route and close it. The error message a exception has occurred popped up. Just thought I'd mention it

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Re: The Smoke Room - Build 19: Rocks of Sombre Hue

Literary References: 

Title: 'A Picture' - Olivia Ward Bush-Banks.

Build Art: 'The maner of kynges, from the Secretum Secretorum' - psuedo-Aristotle.

[MAJOR SPOILER WARNINGS FOR BUILD 19 BELOW]





A Brief Summary

This build (in my playthrough) proceeds the Cliff/Murdoch/Sam intercourse scene, picking up with the trio finishing up their bath and overhearing Avery and Jeb talking to each other, it's been quite a while since they've seen each other, I believe this is romantical in nature, and like the trio were up for some more explicit activities while bathing. Causing Murdoch to shout if anyone is there, in which Avery and Jeb present themselves and say that they were going to bathe. Then the trio heads back to camp to see Ed with a horribly-untuned guitar and which Murdoch proceeds to tune the guitar and play a song, which results in my favorite part of the build, an animatic with music reminiscent of hoedown/square-dancing, this concludes Clifford: Chapter II. Thus begins Clifford: Chapter III, starting right off with the past and perspective of Cornelis van Houwelinck (Clifford Tibbits), speaking to his grandfather while painting, they talk about how things has significantly changed after his mother's passing. Proceeding this, Cliff wakes up beside a naked Sam, and Murdoch who is outside of the tent urges them to get up. [In my playthrough], Cliff discovers Sam's has taken the map that Avery lent and questions him about it. Sam, obviously startled asks Cliff not to tell Avery about what has happened, Cliff obliges while monologuing his doubts and how he will have to think long and hard on his decisions about Sam and the map later. The build shortly ends after arriving in the Meseta settlement, to suspect quiet and even more suspect introduction of Reverend Caldwell (Clifford's contact).

Thoughts & Opinions:

 I really enjoyed this build personally and I think it's one of my favorite builds to be released for The Smoke Room yet. It was on the short side, but the payoff was definitely worth it. Especially the animatic, (correct me if I'm wrong), I believe this was animated by @ShtarFish and huge shout outs towards him and the rest of EchoProject for bringing this build all together, it's a wonderful, sorrowful read as always, I love all the work y'all put into these builds. I love the new HUD we have for the VN now, it adds a whole new flavor to the experience. I was expecting another perspective change after 'And They Tell Me You Are Brutal' but didn't quite expect to see another one so soon. While I love reading over Sam's monologuing and his overall loner, self-depreciating personality, I like the change of pace the perspective changes do, gives us more background on Cliff's thoughts and ideals. I hope we get more animatics in future builds, but that is just my propitious wish towards things. It takes a long time for such things, and this one in particular is special enough so it's enough to be sated.

Overall Rating:

10/10

~NotEvenParan0id

Furniture of the Golden Witch

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[VERY GOOOOOD]

<Very good>!! This level of reasoning is possible for Furudo Erika. What do you think, everyone?

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wow build 19!  what a show! x3

I hope we get a update soon, hopefully a Murdoch update

Cliff is the next

Heeeeey everyone, is there a way to prevent the game from crashing?

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When is Public Build 19 coming out? I'm not trying to rush here but I'm just curious.

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it has been available for patreon for almost a month :/

Can't wait to read more!

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This was the shit...in a good way. The beginning was a little confusing (probably because i was playing at night after having worked a 12 hour shift) but i fell in love with the characters. Easy 9 out of 10 for me. I will admit I wish there was more sexual content involved especially considering the main characters job, but I'm a pervert. I can never have enough of the sex stuff lol. Point is, awesome game. 

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Updates on the patreon near the end of this month, then goes up on itchio 2 weeks later. 

--George

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waiting for the new chapters)

they should only be about a month, give or take!

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Ive been having issues installing the android version since .16. I have more than enough space a bit less than a tb And deleting the whole app and reinstalling doesnt help can someone help me please?

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I just need to know if this game its complete? I play the Nik route but men idk of this the true route or im missing sometimg or i just need to play the other routes... anyone can help? Btw the history is so f word good! I llve it but i didnt know it has so many NSFW moments (i love it) but still nice and awesome!

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Idk why I really don't know why but whenever I see Sam it's like he's staring into my soul

He scares THE HELL out of me

He freaks me out even more than the things that were supposed to His personality and appearance are disturbing to me and idk why but I still like him

Am I crazy?

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Considering what he becomes in echo, that fits perfectly lol

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